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eclipsed
Contributed by
dolly_dagger
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Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 08:14:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Realise my position
When I love like never before
But I am eclipsed by a lifeless girl
Who is scared of getting burnt by
The exciting energy that so many hold
I want yours back with the strings attached,
But like the dummy, I don't want to get burnt
There's so many wounds I've already nursed...Can you blame me for being cautious?
One bitten, twice shy but you're still the light you saw in my eyes
I shimmered for y o u
I opened that door for y o u
Who would have thought that you would have closed that door with such a blank look
Castles made of sand, I guess
You were my rock,
Until I smothered you with my papery ways
Too serious to be a game and I've lost track of the score
It's anyone's match but the ball isn't even on the court anymore
So what are we still doing here?
Copyright ©
dolly_dagger
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2004-04-11 20:14:37]
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Re: eclipsed
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by Remy on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 02:31:21 PM AEST
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erg, sounds as if overtime's not going in your favor... i like the analogy! great writing! ;0)
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Re: eclipsed
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 06:51:41 PM AEST
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OK, i'll applaud this one.
*claps*
Yeah - its full of wit, is short and to the point - and best of all - its resonative with me.
5 stars, again, Ms. Dagger. |
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