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Will you save me?
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 12:33:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I just need you absolutely
all the fears in your mind
I just want you absolutely
to sail this ship of mine
I don't know what the hell you're saying
'cause you're going blind
using all the lies they told you
to hurt your mind
These ghosts I keep inside
shards of glass in my veins
release me from myself, release
from my dilusion of insane
I face these as a soldier would
but useless is my war
the innocence that smiles today
tomorrow will be lying for sure
Now I'm digging to the bone
all the painting
scratching at flesh, drives me mad
to be alive and free i'm escaping
Paranoia
In which I think that I'm not confident
Blood into my hands I can't deny
A buzz into my ears that makes me mad
But I don't look back
While I'm waiting to die
I don't look back
In a weird lullaby I'll carry on
And the hope in my heart is dry
Paranoia
In which I think I'm not that confident
A tiny hope that burns into my breath
A bitter smile delights me at the end
And the ghosts I keep inside myself
how do they see me?
while again I'm drowning
with my soul will you save me?
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MajesticPoet
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2004-04-12 00:33:11]
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Re: Will you save me?
(User Rating: 1 )
by SugimotoYouki on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:54:29 AM AEST
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I can't really follow your track of thoughs..
but still...
I can feel some violence, confusion, acing for a way out...
if that is what you ment, than congratulations...
you've packed that into words quite well |
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