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Dead Man Talking.
Contributed by
Thivanka
on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:34:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I see myself drowning,
While the whole world is frowning,
Lend me a hand if you will,
Please dont take it as a thrill.
Faces twirling around me,
None will set me free,
When will it all end?
To whom shall I call a friend?
Feel my last breaths fading,
Feel my body trembling,
Cant hear the laughter anymore,
As Im finally swept from the shore.
-Thivanka.
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Thivanka
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2004-04-12 03:34:49]
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Re: Dead Man Talking.
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 04:06:23 AM AEST
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| Eerie and haunting write, it gave me chills. Very well-written. |
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Re: Dead Man Talking.
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 08:00:16 AM AEST
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very dark, and sad.
p.s. i love all you peoms! |
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Re: Dead Man Talking.
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 08:14:11 AM AEST
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A sadly heartbreaking write, it bought back memories as I have not long lost a friend to cancer, and I still remeber her last tear as she breathed her last.
Keep on writing you have an amazing talent. |
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Re: Dead Man Talking.
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by arden on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 04:24:38 PM AEST
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ohhhh i really liked this!!!
just wow.... im speechless. this was so good. i loved the flow. just amazing talent you have. keep it up.
Arden |
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