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Bird in a cage
Contributed by
silent
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Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:45:39 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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I am the bird that searches to find
The key to this cage inside of my mind
Wings so broad i can fly so high
The ends of the earth i can easily find
You keep me locked up in this tiny spot
Tying me down with a tight bloodknot
Squeezing the space with each new day
My time will come and you will pay
The price for playing societies game
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silent
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2004-04-12 07:45:39]
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Re: Bird in a cage
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by venkat on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:50:53 AM AEST
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| welldone..nicely expressed. venkat |
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Re: Bird in a cage
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:56:20 AM AEST
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i think it says everything, its beautiful. thank you for sharing. absolutely fabulous!
:-* Lindsey |
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Re: Bird in a cage
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 08:09:23 AM AEST
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Beautifully expressed.... Loved it..
Jenni |
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Re: Bird in a cage
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by AspenGlow on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 08:44:39 AM AEST
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| And Freedom rings out from those words. Great write. as they all have been, keep it up. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Bird in a cage
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 08:46:04 AM AEST
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| Excellent write, I loved and can relate to it so well. |
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Re: Bird in a cage
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by mountainhigh on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:28:21 AM AEST
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Great Poem, I can see the old flag flying high and the words...Don't Tread on Me.......for all to see.
Thanks for sharing. Getting a great collection. |
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Re: Bird in a cage
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:52:00 AM AEST
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| excellent and beautifully written, from title to last word:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Bird in a cage
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by arden on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 12:05:39 PM AEST
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i think this was awesome. the rhyming was really cool. just a very well written poem. loved this.
Arden |
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Re: Bird in a cage
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by Necromant on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 04:38:09 PM AEST
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Wonderful. It's so true! Awesome brilliant write!
Anne :D |
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Re: Bird in a cage
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 12:43:09 AM AEST
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this is a short poem but it has a terrific message :) keep it up .. i love the line
The key to this cage inside of my mind |
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Re: Bird in a cage
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by Justalady on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:53:39 PM AEST
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What a thought provoking poem. Must agree that this line captured my thoughts.
The key to this cage inside of my mind
Nice work. :) June thanks for commenting on my work also. |
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