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A Lone Child
Contributed by
jupiter
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Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 08:36:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A lone boy,
Sitting on the side of a road,
Waiting, wishing,
For people to look at him
People in their cars,
Not looking, not caring,
For they ignore him
He gets up,
Ready to jump off a bridge,
Hoping someone will stop him,
But it's too late
He's gone,
All because he thought he was alone,
But he wasn't
God was with him
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2004-04-12 08:36:33]
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Re: A Lone Child
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by spider on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:14:16 AM AEST
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| really great poem but sad that you have to feel like you do to write it. i woudl say im sure you have a friend or at least someone who cares, even if you don't know it but i doubt you'd believe me. |
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Re: A Lone Child
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:21:30 AM AEST
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| I don't know you but I feel a lot like this too even though I have friends. This was a very expressive and a bit of a sad write, and I hope you don't feel like this anymore. Even if you do, know that you're not alone. Take care. ;) |
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Re: A Lone Child
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by alecfernadez on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 12:12:15 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this, its hard when you have no friends. At the moment I dont have any friends near me or whateva cos I just moved to england, and I cant go to school...So basically I have no friends either |
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