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Red
Contributed by
Alli
on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 10:06:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Red, all I see is red
Bright red swirling around in a pool of angst and torment
Dripping, oozing out
Leaking, leaking and it won't stop
Even if I close my eyes
I'll still see the bright red
What's this?
A purplish-blue tube wrapped up in red
Like a cheap Christmas package
The tube splits open when the knife slices through
And red, more red appears
Where is all this red coming from?
And I look past it, and all I see is the rest of my bloody, mangled wrist
And red
All I see is red.
1999
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Alli
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2004-04-12 10:06:56]
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Re: Red
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by alecfernadez on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 10:12:33 AM AEST
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| this is both frantic, dark, scary and disturbing. Poetry is always comforting when it means something to you, and I'm glad it was comforting for you. Maybe other people with the same feelings can find comfort in this |
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Re: Red
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by Stitch on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 10:25:43 AM AEST
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The images are awesome. The cry for help is undeniable. Scary stuff.
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Re: Red
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by AnGeL_M on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 12:19:34 PM AEST
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This Is Some Scary Stuff..... But I've Been There And Done That , Before God Saved My Worthless Soul...
I Was Very Disturbed At The Time....This Brung Back Terrible Memories For Me.....
It Was Written Very Well Though....
*********LoVe**AnGeL**********
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Re: Red
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:49:30 AM AEST
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| woah |
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