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**twin-traitor**
Contributed by
vanity
on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 01:59:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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twin traitor
why did you hurt me so
who are you i really don't know
why must you stomp on my passion if you know yours is weak
you really don't care it's just fame not friendship is what you seek
i might be dumb but not completely stupid as to see what you just did
you may think your all grown up but deep dwon your just a kid
it's utterly anoying the way you stick to me everyday
you've had me fooled for so long it's more than i can say
your trying to be like me in every single perfection
when i see you in the mirror it's like looking at my own reflection
you have to listen i want there to be only one of me
it seems you have absolutely no personality
i wan to live my dreams i want to do what i want to do
but i simply can't do that when i have a twin here like you
i look forward to the day when your not so blind
to see that everything in my heart is comepletely mine
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2004-04-12 13:59:34]
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Re: **twin-traitor**
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by ammalu on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 03:19:52 AM AEST
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| narration is good - a bit lengthy - theme yet to be clear - keep writing. |
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