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Soul Navigation
Contributed by
merry
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Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:21:26 PM in AEST
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I feel your tenderness reaching inside me
Soul navigating toward soul
Curling around each other
When the winds blow cold in our faces
Our teary eyes say no more
About what we have lost
Give it up to the past like we said we would
Let the ghosts feast on that corpse
While we walk side by side for the very first time
Feeling everything from the beginning
Equal parts of you and me moving forward
Unplanned and unexpected we happened
Chance formed us for this one moment
When happiness could be ours
With fingers eager to explore the contours
We have only seen from distant shores
Carefully we stroke with tender words
Before passions storm sweeps us away
In blissful torrents, we have waited for so long
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-04-12 15:21:26]
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Re: Soul Navigation
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by Queen_Dolly on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:37:40 PM AEST
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| This is simply beautiful. Your choice of words is perfect.
I can imagine how you're feeling.
Lovely poem.
Queen_Dolly |
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Re: Soul Navigation
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:44:50 PM AEST
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A beautiful well written poem.
Well done |
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Re: Soul Navigation
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by MyLastBreath on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:45:51 PM AEST
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| beautiful imagery! Great write! :) |
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Re: Soul Navigation
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by Kie on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 04:34:25 PM AEST
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When distance interferes with love the wait is gruesome. It weighs on the mind, altering thoughts, fueling insecurires but love is a mystical thing. It can break boundaries unheard of and it can navigate souls toward each other with no thought to time or distance in miles.
But there are times when I use to wish that my arms were long enough to comfort when words were not enough.
God have I rambled on this one...
A deeply touching poem...
Kie |
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Re: Soul Navigation
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 05:34:15 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem though sad.... |
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Re: Soul Navigation
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 08:37:49 PM AEST
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ahh gaille, this is so beautiful, just love your poetry, your style is wonderful:) hugs n' love nessa
*roses* |
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Re: Soul Navigation
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 02:16:44 PM AEST
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Brilliantly expressed poem filled with vivid imagery! Enjoyed reading it. Awesome write!
Anne :D |
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Re: Soul Navigation
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:19:50 PM AEST
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Captures the feelings and sentiments and longings and quenchings perfectly.
Flawless.
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Re: Soul Navigation
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 04:21:18 PM AEST
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The was sooo soft and senuous....hopeful and heartbreaking. You have outdone yourself with this masterpiece. ( sighs)
Roses at your feet
Larry |
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Re: Soul Navigation
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:20:25 PM AEST
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| oh...this is so beautiful...i don't know what to say...xxx |
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