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Expiration Date
Contributed by
Soulless
on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 04:12:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You Pull and Peel me away
Exceeding limits of my own
Ive kept with you to this day
But today you stand-alone
These wounds I cant conceal
They run too deep and are too real
Your attempts arrive too late
Cuts you made me will not heal
My time has come to cope with fate
Synchronize with hope and wait
Watch me fall between the cracks youve made
To find and reach my expiration date
You used to hold me with all your might
Love that bound me in one piece
Cure and feed my appetite
Hunger that wont ever cease
The strength you had began to wither
Creating these black holes within me
These wounds I cant conceal
They run too deep and are too real
Your attempts arrive too late
Cuts you made me will not heal
My time has come to cope with fate
Synchronize with hope and wait
Watch me fall between the cracks youve made
To find and reach my expiration date
Cast my remains in the fire
See me burn to ashes and expire
Times before I have risen
And now I shall continue again
Although my body shall begin to fade
My spirit will never die
Restore my body, anew and remade
Let my soul free to fly
Copyright ©
Soulless
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Re: Expiration Date
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by reilt on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 04:15:25 PM AEST
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| amazing poem...really hit me in the heart...beautifully written |
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Re: Expiration Date
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by Kie on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 04:24:46 PM AEST
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A deep poem filled eclipsing pain that we cover. The ending was brilliant...
Kie |
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Re: Expiration Date
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by Thumper0719 on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 04:41:13 PM AEST
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Re: Expiration Date
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by Thumper0719 on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 04:42:33 PM AEST
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Hey, that was a good write. Keep up the good work :)
*Britty* |
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Re: Expiration Date
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 04:55:21 PM AEST
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| great write. i loved every line. brilliant ending too. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: Expiration Date
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by chris3btine77 on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 05:07:45 PM AEST
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| Excellent use of words...I loved it |
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Re: Expiration Date
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by blueheart on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 11:02:15 PM AEST
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| You have a wonderful way with words. Amazing poem once again. |
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Re: Expiration Date
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 02:33:19 PM AEST
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I'm not sure what to say this was amazing... I'm in awe.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Expiration Date
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 06:33:33 PM AEST
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absolutely breathtakingly brilliant:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->- |
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Re: Expiration Date
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:11:02 AM AEST
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A really wonderful and strong piece. Stunning idea worked out very well.
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Expiration Date
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 04:40:08 AM AEST
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*looks up*
Impressive . . . and you're only sixteen, right?
I like this. |
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