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home improvement
Contributed by
dolly_dagger
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Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:39:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You can leave your hat on
This'll never be your home
And I can keep my dress on
Without your constant moans.
How dare you steal my mother's name?
How dare you mess her 'round?
We'd do fine without you
So shed your useless pounds.
Home improvements - half-completed
Half my thoughts you've half-deleted
Why can you not stay there seated?
I don't want those fights repeated.
Try to fill the jagged cracks
With your crappy, half-arsed glue
Why can you not let them be?
Don't you get it? We don't want you!
We don't want you as a father
We've already got one of those
We don't want you as a flakey friend
So you'd best stay as our foe.
You're King of No-one's castle
You're NOT my mum's 'Dream Man'
And I wish you'd never turned up here
With your suitcases and tan.
Copyright ©
dolly_dagger
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2004-04-12 19:39:18]
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Re: home improvement
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by Chade on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 02:51:41 AM AEST
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I don't no whats hppened (but I can kinda gess). Everything will be ok in the end. If you want to talk about nething at all, just give me a ring.
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Re: home improvement
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by morelikelyrics on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 06:15:45 PM AEST
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~Touche~
wow, you told em alright...
very strong and deliberately decriptive
Well done!
~Morelikelyrics |
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Re: home improvement
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:14:07 PM AEST
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that was brilliant and to the point. If i was him i'd get the message and be off like a shot!
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Re: home improvement
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by little_genna on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 01:45:46 AM AEST
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he's still doing your head in then! you should tell him. you know if you ever wanna talk you know where i am.
love and hugs
XgenX |
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Re: home improvement
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:10:15 PM AEST
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| i love the rhyme and rhythem and this power of this poem. extreamly good. |
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Re: home improvement
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by forgottensorrow on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:06:26 PM AEST
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you show him! well written
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