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Along The Walkway
Contributed by
faithmairee
on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 08:36:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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it is her job to sweep the walkway
but she can not sweep today
for her heart has just been broken
and the gripping pain won't go away
she has to sweep the walkway
she must do it everyday if she wants pay
there are two dogs she has adopted
or visa versa along the way
she works away her broom in hand
the sun baring down on her fair face
her new found friends just want to play
up and down the walkway they will race
she bids good morning to the cop
as he saunters by and pets the dogs
but he can't stop too long to play
for he's got tickets he must log
she stops along the walkway to wipe
away the tears her lover caused when
he created havoc in her heart so bound
she barely brushed as she swept the walkway down
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faithmairee
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2004-04-12 20:36:42]
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Re: Along The Walkway
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 12:15:21 AM AEST
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| this is just charming, bittersweet and beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Along The Walkway
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 06:16:36 AM AEST
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| Very engaging and vividly written story, I could picture it very clearly in my head. Another great write ;) |
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