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untitled
Contributed by
rain
on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 10:57:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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you tell a joke
and i laugh
you make me sad
and i cry
the sun goes down
and i sleep
the sun comes up
and i wake
a day goes by
and life goes on
a day goes by
and i move on
time heals all wonds
and all pain fades
as long as the fires out
and the memorys locked away.
Copyright ©
rain
... [
2004-04-12 22:57:32]
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Re: untitled
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 12:56:43 AM AEST
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Very interesting work of art.
great job, short, sweet-n-2 the point.
luv, huggs,
emy
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Re: untitled
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 04:37:03 PM AEST
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enjoyeable read I liked the concepts of life and moving on, this is a great attitude to have because nomatter what happens life moves on the earth still evolves and we must keep going nomatter how hard at times it gets.Great attitude
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Re: untitled
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 09:13:15 PM AEST
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| so true |
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