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The Mother of Another Brother
Contributed by
stampede38
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Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:54:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Oompa loompa, wherefore art thou?
Making my mother milk a cow?
She does not care for that,
She prefers to wear a furry hat.
Smelling all kinds of putrid things.
5, melancholy, muskovin, wings.
Smelling the garbage of today,
She realizes she must stay.
One, two, three, four;
I ate peanuts off the floor.
Five, six, seven, eight;
Selling fingers on a plate
I must now return to the floor,
Flying around is such a bore.
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Re: The Mother of Another Brother
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by nail-to-the-head on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:58:58 AM AEST
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| hmm....i see what you mean about trying to interpret it.....alot to take in.....and first read seems to be like a childs daydream......clever use of rhyming. well done |
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Re: The Mother of Another Brother
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by Queen_Dolly on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:44:49 AM AEST
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Very amusing =)
Interesting read, and quite confusing at first.
Difficult to comprehend.
Great write.
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Re: The Mother of Another Brother
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by TheRaven on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 04:47:51 PM AEST
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| Yes, very confusing, yet pretty good rhyming. Obviously, you didn't let the rhyming limit you. Good job. |
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