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The Lovers's Prayer
Contributed by
OMEGA_
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Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 01:14:23 PM in AEST
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WHEN THERE IS NO BODY AROUND
WHEN THE SILENCE OF THE NIGHT SURROUNDS
TWO PURE SOULS WERE TENDERLY SWINGING AND SINGING WITH NO SOUND
GOTTEN CHARMED BY THE MAGIC OF THE MOON LIGHT
GOTTING MUCH CLOSER HOLDING EACH OTHER TIGHT
THE SMOOTH AIR EXCITED OUR EMOTIONS
MADE OUR SOULS WHISPERING THE HEARTS "NOTHING WILL GONNA TEAR US APART"
KINDNESS WARM CUDDLE, NEW TASTE AND DEEP SHIVER I FELT...
LOSING CONTROL, SWEET KISSES ON MY CHEEK, MY LIPS AND MY ALL...
THE HEAT OF OUR BOILING PASSION FIRES OUR BODIES TILL THEY GOTTEN MELT...
SEA OF HOT ROMANCE WE WERE DEEPLY DRAWNING IN
HIGH INCREASING FEELINGS, THE SEA TURNS INTO A COUPLE DANCING WAVES OF VAPOR..
RELEASED UP SO FARAWAY, SO FREE BUT TIED EACH TO THE OTHER STRAIGHT TO HEAVEN,
WILLING GOD TO NEVER TEAR US APART EVEN AFTER THE END OF LIVINGS,
BRINGING US BACK AGAIN AS TWO NEW BORNS TOGETHER,
HAVING BLESS IN THE INFINITE PARADISE FOREVER...
Copyright ©
OMEGA_
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2004-04-13 13:14:23]
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Re: The Lovers's Prayer
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by arden on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 03:52:18 PM AEST
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your use of words was amazing. this was truely a beautiful write. i enjoyed it . keep it up.
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Re: The Lovers's Prayer
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 04:38:52 PM AEST
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ooo la la... gorgeous writing, very pretty... i love it! ;0)
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Re: The Lovers's Prayer
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:02:42 PM AEST
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| i enjoyed this one a lot... your use of words and description is remarkable here... keep it up :) |
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Re: The Lovers's Prayer
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 05:51:33 AM AEST
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Wwwwwwooooo!
I'm reading them backwards but they r getting better by each one I read.
A masterpeice!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Lovers's Prayer
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 04:57:08 PM AEST
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Very beautiful... pleasantly longing... I loved it!
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Re: The Lovers's Prayer
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:46:55 PM AEST
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this is ~:*beautiful*:~ !!!! hugs n' love nessa
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