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Then Lover
Contributed by
jonteD
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Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 02:52:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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If you ever want more from me Than weekends of outrageous lust, Glorious sex for free, Hours of playing with my bust. Then lover I'm yours!
Wanna have fun all the night, Take me home, make me smile, Do it good, do it right, Treat me to life in style. Then lover I'm yours!
Buy me clothes, only the best, Dress me up like a dogs dinner, Miles and miles better than the rest, In my makeup like a sinner. Then lover I'm yours!
But don't dare ask me to stay, In married life like normal, As for me a ring, no way, If you want me to be formal, Then lover I'm gone
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Re: Then Lover
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 03:05:09 PM AEST (User
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I have an odd feeling other guys will be jumping on this one.
Very interesting poem a bit off the norm that I've grown accostumed to.
Nicely done though.
Still rings are nice gifts. |
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Re: Then Lover
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jellybellyprincess on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 03:32:51 PM AEST (User
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This has a humor that's hard to place--- subtle humor I think!
In any case, it made me smile. I especially like the format of the rhyming and then having the tag line on the bottom.... all except for the last one, which is the cap of it all.
Well done ; )
God bless,
Ellen |
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Re: Then Lover
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 05:47:54 PM AEST (User
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:>) |
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