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So Far Away
Contributed by
bleeding_chains
on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 05:34:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Its been so long
Since i felt warm tears run down my face
But now they flow
Like
A
Winding
River
So
Free
Until i feel metal touch my lips
Like blood
Sometimes i wish you was there
Feeling the tears run down your back
But as you stand so far away
You will never see silver water
Splashing to the ground
The noise is deafening to me
But you never hear a sound
Which only causes more tears
To
Flow
Like
A
Winding
River
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bleeding_chains
... [
2004-04-13 17:34:55]
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Re: So Far Away
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 05:52:22 PM AEST
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oi... poetic romance with twinges of darkness spazzing all through and through... good writing, but oi this is sad...
~Remy~ |
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