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she, my goddess
Contributed by
lonely_kakashi
on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 07:04:12 PM in AEST
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Lost i have been,
my world shattered by her,
her name i can not say,
the pain is too much,
why does she act this way,
i loved her so much.
her face, a picture of beauty,
her lips, too irrisistable,
she, my goddess,
a figure of perfection,
why can not life be fair.
My eyes gorged with the picture,
my heart beating like a drum,
my body shaking,
i want to faint.
I stare at this sight,
my mind fixated on this delight,
i can not move,
im stunned,
let me run away,
i can not face it anymore.
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2004-04-13 19:04:12]
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Re: she, my goddess
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by nail-to-the-head on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 07:07:32 PM AEST
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i like this too.
shows strong emotions.
well done |
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Re: she, my goddess
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 07:39:44 PM AEST
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| this is very very good...i hope your pain heals soon |
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Re: she, my goddess
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 08:36:01 PM AEST
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see i told you this was good, you just thought i was being biased as its about me. maybe you should believe no matter what the content of your work.
love and hugs
XgenX |
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Re: she, my goddess
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:22:23 PM AEST
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Wow, very good write, well expressed!
Anne :D |
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Re: she, my goddess
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by Lost_Shadow on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 03:30:44 AM AEST
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| Really moving, keep up the good work. And thanx for the site addy |
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