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Even When
Contributed by
reilt
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Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 08:17:05 PM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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Even when
It comes a knockin'
[Quick! Hide under the bed]
You never falter of fail
[There's monsters that dwell]
You simply settle for the worst
[Or is it all in my head...My ****** up head?]
And see the best
[There's the voices...]
Hold me in the silence
And let me be,
[Convincing me again that]
Love me
Even when
[I don't love myself]
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-04-13 20:17:05]
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Re: Even When
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by lonely_kakashi on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 08:20:50 PM AEST
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I like the way this gives me mental pictures of whats goin on
:)
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Re: Even When
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 05:41:16 AM AEST
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| Whoa, excellent piece! I can imagine this as a song. |
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Re: Even When
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 04:06:45 PM AEST
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| i like the way you wrote it... it gives a vivid depiction :) :) |
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