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Hollow Dreams
Contributed by
Eve
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Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:23:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Take me away with the wind at our sail
We'll fly like birds over the oceans
Uncaring to any other human motions
Never dreaming we'll ever be frail.
Promise me you'll steal forever for me
Defeat never like it never has been
Tossing it carelessly to the wind
And we'll skim over this turbulent sea.
Don't let your mind wander and think back
Now it's all located deep within the past
Hoist the sail further up the mast
When your resolution is under attack.
We're leaving here, this empty land
Can't turn around for paradise is near
Be rid of your meaningless fear
If you need strength, take my hand...
(Dazed and dizzy I wake from my dreaming
Needlessly holding tightly on
I know that it's already long gone
And I know I'll never know it's meaning.)
Copyright ©
Eve
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2004-04-13 21:23:18]
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Re: Hollow Dreams
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:38:04 PM AEST
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oh wow... surreal stuff, hope you get some insight on that one soon. i'm not one for interpreting really, anywho - great imagery in your descriptions. ;0)
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Re: Hollow Dreams
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by Rhei76 on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:17:16 PM AEST
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nicely displayed.
The strength is in your hand.
they say dreams are displaced
emotions in a light that reveals
the vagues of concepts.
It's like seeing a teacher in your dreams, and this teacher you like but in the dream you are mad at him/her. then you wake up thinking i don't hate that teacher, he/she is a great person.
Well, the dream could of been telling you didn't like something conected to him/her.
It's strange, they say a picture is worth a thousand words. Well images are the communicater to our self.
Maybe if you can figure out the subjects from your dream are connected to, you can find
what you're looking for.
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