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Keep On Believing
Contributed by
Whisper
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Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:17:37 PM in AEST
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It was Everything, I having being Dreaming it Would be.
Just Like in my Dreams.
A New Way ,a farer ways from here.
His needs are met and coming Due.
Things are Great and he's Doing Fine.
His eyes they twinkle as always
As soon as they met mine.
Conversation came all rushed and balled together,
Then came a Hush.
That moment I've been waiting for,
had finally arrived.
His hands touched my cheeks,
And he drew his lips close to mine..
I was scared for a fleeting moment
and almost forgot to close my eyes.
For fear when I opened them again
He would be gone .
But No,
When at last , they drew Open
and we stood face to face .
He stood Handsome ,Proud
and Still There.
It was just as I Dreamt it ,
Time after Time again.
The earth -
Seem -Stood Still and we lisened together.
"For whispers in the wind."
And ever so gently he whispered in my ear,
"I have and will returned again .
I haven't forgotten about you "Duckie"
I've even made all New Plans
That will Always Include You."
The Whole Day he talked and I lisened,
and I watched his face closely.
Holding each Smile Line and every
Wrinkle for memory
With just his funny way of Speaking
And how he makes me Laugh.
When he puts his arm around Me
I still Tingle and Feel a Warm Loving Glow.
Yes I saw him for just abit and it was Enough
Somehow.
But Thank you for granting Wishes
and I wish all of you could know .
It does pay to keep on Believing .
Coz You Just Never Know :-)
Whisper
Copyright ©
Whisper
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2004-04-13 22:17:37]
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Re: Keep On Believing
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:22:57 PM AEST
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good write and very inpiring as it will re-new peoples faith in luv. Thanks for sharing.
Great write and seneous but mostly jus joy, huh?
luv, huggs, faith,
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Re: Keep On Believing
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:35:20 PM AEST
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This is so perfect for my life right now. I am so glad it is for you. I am learning to love and trust again. It is scary after all these years but I keep hoping and praying it will be real this time. I could feel myself smiling as I read this with a spark of joy and hope in my heart. Thank you so much for sharing this.
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Re: Keep On Believing
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by Schnikes13 on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:00:07 PM AEST
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Very sweet and inspiring!
This poem lit a light within me! Thank you! |
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Re: Keep On Believing
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by Rhei76 on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:17:48 PM AEST
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| nicely done. it was a nice telling of your feelings. |
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Re: Keep On Believing
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 02:03:59 PM AEST
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I do enjoy reading these declarations of love(one thing i'm not to hot at writing about) this was beautiful in it's content.
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Re: Keep On Believing
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:47:14 PM AEST
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Aww this is beautiful. Great write
Hugs 'n Love
- Becca |
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