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Who Is It We Seek?
Contributed by
morelikelyrics
on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:31:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Abandoned I was, among this weary courtyard,
Aimlessly I wandered, throughout vast corridors of mind.
Engrossed by infinite mist, and endless, dreary fog,
Into the abyss, I traveled, to see what I may find.
Miles reduced to inches, this surreptitious thought abbreviated,
Years devaluated to mere seconds, yet no such eternal disorder alleviated.
But I have arrived, at no certain destination,
And I have departed, from an unknown location.
Yet ahead, branching are depondent roads,
Sidetracked by encouraging avenues,
Without any sign, or indication to guide my direction,
I simply play the guessing game, a random path I choose.
But before I can select my fate, or possibly my success,
The corner of my eye spots a figure's movement,
To one side, a darkened sillhouette, I notice,
The shadow produced by a lonesome migrant.
And so by this time, curiousity overtakes my control,
Only in search of this mysterious ghost,
To put a face to another wandering soul,
And discover who it is, I think of most.
And so the destiny is created,
Not by me, the cautious mind deliberating,
But by the emotion instigated,
And chosen, was my predestination.
It was you, to my utter astonishment,
Who took form of the shapely apparition,
The one roving with beauty God-sent,
And a mind with such imagination.
But when question yearning for an answer,
Is responded by a satisfying solution,
Yet additional wonder is imposed,
And another inquiry composed within.
My new inquisiton arisen,
Does not ask as to who you are,
For this I may already know,
But the reply I seek,
Is...
Am in search of you,
Or are you looking for me?
Copyright ©
morelikelyrics
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2004-04-13 22:31:17]
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Re: Who Is It We Seek?
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:50:50 PM AEST
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Very good writing!
Great job.
luv, huggs, hope,
emy |
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Re: Who Is It We Seek?
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 12:07:26 AM AEST
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Awesome Write :-) Loved It.....Keep Em Coming...
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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Re: Who Is It We Seek?
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by KittyGurl on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 02:21:38 PM AEST
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| Very deep, special poem. Very good use of words. Very well Written. Very everything! |
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Re: Who Is It We Seek?
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:45:44 PM AEST
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That was wonderful More...Great write, excellent imagry... all together a very interesting write.
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Re: Who Is It We Seek?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:53:39 PM AEST
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i cant think of anything but you and your lovely poems. everyday i wait for one more. wonderfully done this time. (and everytime of course^^)
-bella? |
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Re: Who Is It We Seek?
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by arden on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 12:46:45 PM AEST
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a very deep poem, your use of words was amazing. a truly awesome stunning write. well done keep it up.
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Re: Who Is It We Seek?
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:03:15 PM AEST
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| This is a stunningly amazing write. Excellent job. *S* Cynthia |
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