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last chance
Contributed by
elizabethfusco
on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:03:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You say they encompass you
And we cannot follow you.
Your semi-suicidal words fill my head
Entering my conscience,
Subconsciously.
Is that what you request?
Compassion:
Commitment:
Pure animal instinct
Tells me to dial a number
I have long since forgotten.
Even when I hear you
I refuse to listen -
I cannot sleep in peace
While you scream for mercy
While he takes away any and all innocence
You once possessed.
In a sea full of regret
how much must one take
for redemption to set it?
It's irrefutable, it you were to ask me.
He'll never quit and
you'll always allow it.
I would provide my assistance
if I had the Slightest notion that you,
Of All People,
would use it to depart.
but
When I see the blood
and you can still smile
I know all I'll ever need to.
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elizabethfusco
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2004-04-13 23:03:02]
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Re: last chance
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:58:28 PM AEST
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I must commend you on writing this poem. The sad truth is the majority of these women are addicted to these men. It is not fear that keeps most of them there, it is a sick addiction for the man and his actions. Primal but true. I have dealt with so many like this. Sad life for a human.
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