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Hold Me
Contributed by
JJTiger
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Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:04:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It's undoubtedly you I need
Only with you my life will I lead
I feel so terribly lonely
Tell me that you will hold me
You are my rainbow through the rain
The only one that keeps me sane
I am feeling so terribly cold
I am only warm when you I hold
I am so lonely without you
Like the sky losing it's joyous blue
Filled with only depressing clouds of gray
You are the radiant sun that lights up my day
Tell me you are only mine
And that our love will always shine
Without you I am so lonely
Won't you please hold me
You I never want to lose
To be forever with you is what I choose
Alone I am a single flower in the winter
Losing love and becoming bitter
You are my glowing golden light
Without you I'd lose my sight
So with me won't you always stay
Be together and never far away
When we can't spend time together and call it ours
I feel like the moon with out the stars
So just hold me tight
And I will know all will be all right
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Re: Hold Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:11:27 PM AEST
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| Were you thinking of me when you wrote that?Souns like my life. |
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Re: Hold Me
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by AnGeL_M on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:31:47 PM AEST
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This Is How I've Been Feeling Lonely Like No One Cares...
I Just Need Someone To Hold Me And Comfort Me...
Good Write Thanks For Sharing...
*******LoVe**AnGeL*********
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Re: Hold Me
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:34:24 PM AEST
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Were u thinking of a friend of mine when u wrote that 'cause that sounds like her...
Good write full of emotion... and tenderness!!!
I thought of my friend even when I read the title... it just makes me wnat to hold my friend... but I can't...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Hold Me
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by JusMeOtay on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:56:24 PM AEST
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Hey Bud...
'tis a nice and mushy poem. You know me and those...they don't really move as one. But...for you...I read 'em. ;-) Doin wonderful in it thats for sure!!! I love it when you write what you feel. GO TIGER!
Your amiga-Jeni |
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