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Damnation
Contributed by
marsh62287
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Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:26:24 PM in AEST
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my life constrained
i reach for thy death
but im just so short
clipped of my wings
damned to thy own hell
all for all
these damned damnations
to which have shown me
into harsh depression
and thy time grows no more near
than yesterdays tomorrow
now yet i reach for death
my only wish
i wish from god
but yet thy god
has damned me to this hell
for yet all eternity
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2004-04-13 23:26:24]
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Re: Damnation
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by mercedes on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 10:28:47 AM AEST
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| Well written. Freedom and salvation are in tomorrow and tomorrow is always in the future, never in the present. |
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Re: Damnation
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 05:57:06 PM AEST
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This made me think of depression, suicide and desperation.
Dark and very interesting to read.
Kie |
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Re: Damnation
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 12:11:49 AM AEST
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| nice writing. |
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