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The Shop Man
Contributed by
Stampede38
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Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:24:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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One day, in a shop,
A man made a doll house.
He was an old man, and the
Tools shook in his hands.
He was always saying
ya cant rush art!?
he died, yseterday
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2004-04-14 08:24:17]
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Re: The Shop Man
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by Chade on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:28:31 AM AEST
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| interesting... |
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Re: The Shop Man
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 09:15:38 PM AEST
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| didnt expect the ending. interesante indeed |
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Re: The Shop Man
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by reprobate on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 04:59:36 AM AEST
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How sad. Alas, I shall miss him, Horatio...
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