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stepping on the eyes
Contributed by
valek
on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 12:39:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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losing myself in an enigma which will never be solved a mystery which hasn't faultered, never has it evolved will you ever, even think to answer it will anyone ever, even if they picture it some things arent as easy as they seem life is a puzzle, just as a muffled scream taking it another day, stepping on the steel beam why do you want to stay on the impaired team you cry and scream that it will constantly hurt gouge your eyes, tear your flesh, and rip your shirt making yourself suffocate, slam your face in the dirt keep putting your hand on the eye and you continue to get burnt why do you discriminate against the goats still you wear your black velvet coats your just another sheep in the crowd trying so hard to stand out, when you constantly scream aloud
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Re: stepping on the eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:11:21 PM AEST (User
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very descriptive i like your use of words... |
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Re: stepping on the eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by purplestary on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:37:11 PM AEST (User
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good poem....little confusing but it flows really good... |
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