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A Drop Of Love
Contributed by
shahan
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Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:06:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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At last the rain came!
In a life,
All my dreams,
Have never felt so fresh.
The heart, the thirsty, sandy heart,
Kisses the drop of rain.
The desert I carry inside me,
All of a sudden,
Tastes the sweet muddy road.
I looked at the moon.
A wet moon ,
The rain draws a sweet canal.
The light starts to fade,
Yes, my love,
Not all days end into night
Copyright ©
shahan
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2004-04-14 15:06:38]
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Re: A Drop Of Love
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by luckycharm on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:16:24 PM AEST
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Now that was really deep, and I can relate to that.
You are a very good writer.-luckycharm. |
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Re: A Drop Of Love
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by abbzydude on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:19:32 PM AEST
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| Very deep, i liked it alot, i can relate to it too. good write! |
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Re: A Drop Of Love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:47:37 PM AEST
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this is so amazing!great imagery.....you are very talented!
Sin, tamarack1pines |
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