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To Young
Contributed by
MusicGurl3291
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Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 04:49:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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It was late Saterday night
And she was home alone
Her mom said she'd be back at 8'
But she never did show
Here it comes its 12am
the phone starts to ring
She gets a call its the police
They found her missing wring
But that was just the good news
The worst was yet to come
They said that she was drunk
And they didnt hear the drum
She drops the phone as she starts to scream
"Why, im to young?"
The police said she drove to fast
The person she hit was gone
When they got to the scene
They thought she would last
But she didnt
She was done
They said some prayers
Flowers were laid
And they went on with their daily lives
As she stood there in the open meadows and hills
She screamed at the sky
"Why are you doing this,what have i done wrong?
I will never forgive you
Im just to young"
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Re: To Young
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 05:08:55 PM AEST
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| that is such a touching poem |
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Re: To Young
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by Chade on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 05:10:11 PM AEST
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| very moveing |
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Re: To Young
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:28:54 PM AEST
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Luved this a lot too:)
I luv ur poems theyre awesome!!!
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