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Blinded
Contributed by
parkman
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Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 05:01:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Woke up this morning, my eyes opening wide
Seeing nothing but darkness, feeling at my side
What has happened, where is the light
Why can't I see, where is my sight
I swing my legs, over my bed
Stumble over something, bang my head
Groping at the floor, grabbing an object with haste
A trickle runs down to my lips, my blood I can taste
I manage to get up, in this hell that's so black
How am I going to survive, living in the dark
I find the light switch, click, nothing has changed
Where is my sight, God this feels so strange
Feeling through the air, finding the door
Get outside, still darkness, I scream 'til I'm sore
Can anyone hear me, help I can't see, I'm blind
Take my hand and lead me, please, don't leave me behind
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parkman
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2004-04-14 17:01:46]
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Re: Blinded
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 05:20:37 PM AEST
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WOW!!! I could feel the urgency in this...Great write...
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Re: Blinded
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:24:42 PM AEST
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Nicely envisioned. I was temporarily blinded reading this.
Imploring write.
Well done. |
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