|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
soul to drown
Contributed by
valek
on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 06:42:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
|
the loss is too great, yet the death so pointless
the cold meat hits the concrete and the police stop chasing her
i hope this will be over soon, that i'm sure
let me out of this trunk and let me breath like the rest
i'm waiting for you to die, so i can be like everyone else
waiting for your soul to drown, so i can finally be myself
i dont need you anymore, i want to crucify you
if even you had the chance, how would you try to
i want to fly to the ground, bury myself in asphalt
chasing the shadows around, blame is only by default
throw me off the horizon, forget i was even alive
pressures heavy like a ton, sanity is like a swan dive
your plastic claws are scratching, erasing my past sight
your smoke is filling my lungs, breathing is getting tight
your words are destroying my thoughts, blackening my mind
your actions give me nothing to lose, my emotions are blind
Copyright ©
valek
... [
2004-04-14 18:42:16]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: soul to drown
(User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 11:36:48 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| This is just advice, you don't have to take it, but maybe you might want to chop the lines up more... I don't always think about what I'm writing either! That's weird! Wonder why that is... |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
