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WICKED LADY
Contributed by
lovingcritters
on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:30:32 PM in AEST
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"WICKED LADY"
Fear inspiring body
no morals, merciless, agonizing
ageless aching, endless, n'er ailing.
sharp, piercing, throbbing, gnawing,
without conscience, unfeeling, this
"Wicked Lady!"
Penetrates deeply, vicious means
extremely subtle, rarely weans
raw, insensitive, pulsating state
unreasonable, no tender abate, this
"Wicked Lady!"
Victim's darkest shadow
unmatched intensity forlorn echo
befriended by no one, alone......
intrudes n'er welcome, unknown this
"Wicked Lady!"
Verocious insatiable appetite
waits patiently, insensate attack
personality cruel, unbearable
chisled cripple 'tis her chattle, this
"Wicked Lady!"
Severs twisted nerves
torturous wrack undeserves
wee morning hours unrelenting
no compromise, nor repenting
gut wrenching reign, this
"Wicked Lady"......
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known
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to
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all
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as
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Pain!
Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
April 13, 2004
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Pain is the most individulized thing on earth
It is true that it is the great common bond as
well, but that realization only comes
when it is over.
To suffer is to be alone.
To watch another suffer is to know the barrier
that shuts each of us away by himself.
Only individuals can suffer!
~Edith Hamilton~
Copyright ©
lovingcritters
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Re: WICKED LADY
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by AspenGlow on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:35:36 PM AEST
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Beautiful through out. It is one thing that separates us and yet bonds us together like steel. It does feel so good when it leaves us.
Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: WICKED LADY
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:49:16 PM AEST
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I am so sorry to hear of your pain. When I first saw the picture I thought WOW now that's a body. After reading the poem I now know that the wicked lady is pain. May she be vanquished forever!
Kie |
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Re: WICKED LADY
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by morelikelyrics on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:51:22 PM AEST
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I love the incredible sense of alternate vocabulary, completely altering the mental view created by each word, with so much more meaning...
Vey detailed, yet vague in all the right places...
Very well done!
~Morelikelyrics |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 09:48:30 PM AEST
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She is a very wicked lady and totally demanding. She refuses to let go of you for one minute. I pray for your release from her grasping fingers. Hope you are better soon, my friend.
Love,
Rita |
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Re: WICKED LADY
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 10:10:34 PM AEST
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| I pray for your release of pain my self & hope she'll never return! Get better soon! Christina |
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Re: WICKED LADY
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 01:11:53 AM AEST
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| there are times........when she can be a sweet embrace.........and others.......when the dagger through her heart is sweeter..........may you find the trail between........ |
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Re: WICKED LADY
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 05:48:49 AM AEST
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SOUNDS LIKE A LADY I WOULDN'T WANNA BETRAY! NICELY WRITTEN!!
DAN!!! |
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Re: WICKED LADY
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 09:33:16 PM AEST
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OMG!! This is a splendid write....
I hope she disappears forever, Connie....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: WICKED LADY
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 06:37:50 PM AEST
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I guessed who she was. I know she is torturing you. I will keep praying. You let us know how you are. A very vivid portrayal.
Stitch |
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Re: WICKED LADY
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:17:34 AM AEST
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A wonderful description of pain, which is ever so personal, known to so many and despised by all. Very good write.
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Hur |
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Re: WICKED LADY
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by silent on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 08:48:29 PM AEST
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WOW, now that's some seriously good writing. That comment at the bottom by "edith Hamilton" i presume is awesome, really this whole piece especially with the comment is brilliant. Keep it up.
Silent |
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Re: WICKED LADY
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:05:25 PM AEST
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| Critters, this is a wicked write. Excellent job. The pic freaked me out. I wasn't expecting it. LOL *S* Cynthia |
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Re: WICKED LADY
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by Baronhawk on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:03:42 AM AEST
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| Ahh.. pain that wicked wicked lady indeed I too have felt a timbre of her most horrendous touch. Once during my gentle tumble with a speeding motorcylce and thence with the breaking of my heart... I know my meager collections of pain is perhaps not as crippling as others nor as immersive temporally as yours have been...but its touch is familiar to me too. Once again you have captured a face of the many visages of this world and shared it with us in a way most pleasing...bravo and bon chance. |
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:15:17 PM AEST
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~:*ouchies*:~ i love the style and flow here, it went so fast i was done b4 i even knew it lol, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: WICKED LADY
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 11:53:27 PM AEST
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i READ THIS AFTER YOUR POST BUT i SEE my comment didn't work.
In Jesus name, amen go pain!
I try not to click more than once but sometimes ya have too.
I havn't forgotten u for one day.
luv u mom,
your brat,
emy |
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