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Damaged
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
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Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 09:16:17 PM in AEST
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She always looked like you
I tried, but I didn't know how to
Feeling on the outside
I closed my eyes and just tried to hide
But I found I couldn't will it all away
She was dark, she was cold
How was I supposed to keep control?
Kept my feet in the light
You still let me walk with you at night
But I felt so out of place and in the way
Wanting to be like you
But you said nobody else would do
You told me "never change"
But somehow my mind got rearranged
Came to you in the shadows and there I stayed
They all said I was gone
I told them "I'm still here and you're wrong"
Then looked in the mirror
And saw the awful truth I had feared
Became what I hated and my soul decayed
And now I've seen myself
Become one with the darkness itself
I've fallen so far down
You can never hope to reach me now
I guess I wasn't good enough for myself
Now when I see her face
My will disappears without a trace
How did I get down here
Where I can't even fathom her fear?
I don't think she'd ever see me in herself
So it was all a waste
I fell so far, so fast, in such haste
You were six feet under
Now I'm at twelve feet and life's a blur
I wanted to be like you, now I hate you
I'm too damaged to live
And there's nothing left inside to give
I've lost my faith in love
What was I ever so afraid of?
And why did I think I had to be like you?
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Re: Damaged
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 11:01:15 PM AEST
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very intriging write, perfect style and grace, the whole mirror bit just adds so much and makes it so captivating! this is all so wonderful, i will follow all of your series:) hugs n' love nessa x
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Re: Damaged
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by Overstated on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 04:38:16 PM AEST
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| wow this is a wonderful poem i agree with you - you couldn't tell it was inspired by SK8er Boi but its always good to have creative influances... i think this was a excellent poem indeed... |
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Re: Damaged
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by Remy on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 08:29:08 PM AEST
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well versed, classic example of relational junk, great writing!
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