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my missing heart
Contributed by
Vickie
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Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:37:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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everything happens for a reason i hear them say,
i'll try and not cry when i think of that day.
hoping to see your smiling face,
wondering if anyone took my place.
we said we'd always be friends,
does anyone have a heart they can lend?
i once had a heart but i gave it away,
they told me i could have it, only if i would stay.
now here i am confused and in pain,
my heart is gone and there is left only a stain.
a stain so deep that can never be erased,
i have to ask will my heart be replaced?
so now i sit here and cry,
wondering why my mind lied.
how could it just take control
but i knew without you i wasnt whole.
the battle between my soul and my mind,
it made me forget it made me blind.
the feelings i had were now in doubt,
my mind has won and it wanted out
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Vickie
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2004-04-15 00:37:50]
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Re: my missing heart
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:43:41 AM AEST
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| beautiful expression of feelings, sadly when one loves with their whole soul and is rejected it leaves such a painful void, my heart goes out to you, warm welcome to ypdc, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: my missing heart
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by emystar on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 01:30:48 AM AEST
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Very strong write.
sometimes it happens this way.
luv, huggs, faith, healing,
emy |
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Re: my missing heart
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by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 05:39:51 AM AEST
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Oh How Sad Vickie I Know Exactly How You Feel Though..
Wish You The Best Of Luck....And Welcome To YPDC....Great Write Even Though A Little Sad....
*******LoVe**AnGeL*********
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