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Sail the seas pt.2
Contributed by
luckycharm
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Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:18:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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It's hard to face you,
In this time of fear,
What should I do,
Cause you are not near,
Should I shed a tear,
To make you come back,
I can't make you hear,
Or keep in contact,
You were everything,
You were close to me,
And now you disappered,
The doubts and fears,
The many tears,
I need to be so free,
So I'll sail the seas,
I still hear the endless call,
Who's gonna be here when I fall,
I need some time to think,
And I don't wan't this to be fake,
I feel like the enmy is in me,
And there's no escaping,
Come find me,
And rescue me,
From this nightmare,
Please spare,
This life of mine,
And stop wasting time,
I just wan't to love again,
This time I have to win,
The doubts and fears,
The many tears,
I need to be so free,
So I'll sail the seas
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Re: Sail the seas pt.2
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 03:39:39 PM AEST
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Wow, pam... another wondeful write. :) You write with a lot of love and depth. Great write.
Lindsey |
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Re: Sail the seas pt.2
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 11:44:42 AM AEST
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| This is really good! |
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Re: Sail the seas pt.2
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 08:33:05 PM AEST
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| excelente, very well written. |
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Re: Sail the seas pt.2
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by New_York_Chick on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 07:18:00 PM AEST
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another beautiful image you portray
your poetry is wonderful |
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