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Whispers in the wind
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Friday, 27th September 2002 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
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WHISPER OF THE WIND
IN THE WHISPERS OF THE WIND,
YOUR CALLING VOICE I HEAR AGAIN.
RATHER FAINT, BUT EVER CLEAR,
HAUNTING DRAWING ME SO NEAR.
CAUTIOUSLY I START TO WALK,
DEEPER, AND DEEPER INTO THE DARK.
DESPERATE FOR WHAT DRAWS ME HERE,
SUROUNDED BY ONLY FEAR.
WHAT I SEEK SEEMS SO FAR AWAY,
WILL THE WIND LEAD THE WAY?
OR WILL I BE FOREVER LOST?,
FOR RIGHT NOW IT SEEMS A TOSS.
WILL YOUR VOICE EASE FROM MY MIND?,
I GUESS ILL ONLY KNOW IN TIME.
BUT FOR NOW I STILL HEAR YOU IN THE WIND,
OVER AND OVER, TIME AND AGAIN.
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
... [
2002-09-27 10:00:00]
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Re: Whispers in the wind
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by Lia on
Friday, 27th September 2002 @ 12:36:33 PM AEST
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| very good poem....nice rythym |
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Re: Whispers in the wind
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by Ophelia on
Saturday, 28th September 2002 @ 02:37:17 AM AEST
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| I really found this beautiful and so fulll of emotion while you seem so empty, or maybe that was me. But I like. |
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Re: Whispers in the wind
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by fancyface4898 on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 01:59:18 PM AEST
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| Very nice poem. I really liked it alot |
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Re: Whispers in the wind
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by GreenLady89 on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 09:14:46 AM AEST
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| BEAUTIFUL!!!Not only did you manage to make it rhyme....you kept the same theme throughout the whole thing. I enjoyed how it was empty...and heartfelt at the same time with an eerie twist. I'll look forward to reading more of your work. |
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