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You Are My Undoing
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:13:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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When darkness descends
I cradle the moon in my palm
The stars sing me to sleep
But I find no peace in this qualm
I wonder
And I wait for you
Imagine
A life with some truth
I thought I found love
But there's no room in all this hate
Listen to the rain
I ache and hope it's not too late
Where are you?
(Right in front of me)
Are you there?
(You're all that I see)
Am I destined to be this alone?
Will I find my way home?
The streets are dark, let me hold your hand
Though I don't understand
The nights are long and so confusing
You are my undoing
I don't know what's a lie and what's true
But I'm tired and I'm through
Let me know you can
If you can be the one for me
Put my heart at ease
'Cause it's not coming easily
Maybe I'm too lost
Am I supposed to be here now?
Or is this all wrong?
I can't love you, I don't know how
I'm screaming
Everything's broken
I'm bleeding
Black heart's awoken
I'm dying
Why don't you hear me?
I'm fading
Not feeling a thing
I thought you'd be here
I thought you'd be healing my wounds
I thought I knew you
But you're with me in solitude
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MoonlitAngel
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2004-04-15 22:13:57]
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Re: You Are My Undoing
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:22:31 PM AEST
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| absolutely awesome! i love some of these lines of yours. |
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Re: You Are My Undoing
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by ThePumpkinKing on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:26:16 PM AEST
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| this was awesome!!! some very awesome lines (as already stated above) this was great |
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Re: You Are My Undoing
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by emystar on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:44:18 PM AEST
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Supercalafradualisticexpialladoshus!
Awesome!
luv, huggs,solitude,
emy |
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Re: You Are My Undoing
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 11:25:28 PM AEST
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ohh dee, this is beautifully written, enchantingly captivating:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->- |
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