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Tonight
Contributed by
ThePumpkinKing
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Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:34:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Time, it's never time to go
You will never ever know how I can never let it show
Turn me inside out and you might see,
just what's going through me
Tear open my heart, tear out my soul
See the love that's being concealed
See the love that wants you tonight
But I'm, I am never right
I'm sure if I was ever right death would come and take my life
But feeling this is worse than death
I can barely take a breath
The more it grows, the more I hurt
I know that we will change on this great stage
But we're not so different and we're not the same
And I'd lay down my life under this empty sky
If I could have you tonight
We could kill some time
We could burn our hate
And be alive tonight
We could forget all pain
We could forget all sorrow
And be alive tonight
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ThePumpkinKing
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2004-04-15 22:34:49]
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Re: Tonight
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:37:49 PM AEST
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| Very deep, very well done. High five dude! |
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Re: Tonight
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 11:33:14 PM AEST
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| wonderful expression of feelings:) ! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Tonight
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by Kie on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:59:09 PM AEST
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That last stanza is hazardous to my mentality. I'd best not open the door to the pizza boy tonight.
"But I'm, I am never right
I'm sure if I was ever right death would come and take my life"
My favorite lines. Excellent.
Kie |
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