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Please Dad
Contributed by
ginsdance
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Friday, 27th September 2002 @ 02:30:00 PM in AEST
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Please, Dad, today just hear my call.
I'm sorry I've messed up over all,
My life is wrecked, my knees are skinned,
My emotions undisciplined.
I can't get up all though I try,
Please don't be upset if I cry.
Though I can't fight what I can't see,
Please, Dad, say you're still proud of me.
Copyright Ryan Cook 2002
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ginsdance
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2002-09-27 14:30:00]
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Re: Please Dad
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 27th September 2002 @ 02:33:18 PM AEST
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| Great write, Ryan..can feel the desperate cry in this poem... Thanks for sharing it with us, Gin.... |
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Re: Please Dad
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th September 2002 @ 04:32:38 PM AEST
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| Great write. It touched my heart. |
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