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Blind Night
Contributed by
Hurretje
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Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 02:39:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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All dark clouds
Obscure the night
A lonely star
Is smothered
Without a trace
The sunshine
A meaningless word
The moonlight
Slipped with my memories
Of you
The raindrops
Oust my blind tears
The dark road
Devours my future
It's me, alone
Hid in the shadows
My hands reach out
For the dawn
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Hurretje
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2004-04-16 02:39:24]
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Re: Blind Night
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by venkat on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:51:29 AM AEST
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| simply beautiful..when ever I walk in moonlit nights I must search for you in shadows.well wrapped. venkat |
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Re: Blind Night
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by emystar on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:15:48 AM AEST
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Sad but yet beautifull.
luv, huggs, dawn,
emy |
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Re: Blind Night
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:16:54 AM AEST
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| very very moving bittersweet poem, well woven words:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Blind Night
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by reilt on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:42:51 AM AEST
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| sad but so beautiful...fantastic write...well done |
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Re: Blind Night
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 06:30:07 AM AEST
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| Such a sad write, but a beautiful one. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Blind Night
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by arden on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 10:11:48 AM AEST
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this is beyond beautiful and so very sad.
this was written so well, just amazing talent you have. well done keep it up.
Arden |
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Re: Blind Night
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 11:13:28 AM AEST
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bittersweet, beautiful and a write I can relate to all too well.
Beautifully written
Larry |
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Re: Blind Night
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by Thivanka on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 09:57:04 AM AEST
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Short and sweet. Nice one.
-Thivanka |
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Re: Blind Night
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 01:58:56 AM AEST
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It's me, alone
Hid in the shadows
My hands reach out
For the dawn
This verse summed the whole poem up and rounded it off nicely i liked the idea of hands reaching out for the dawn, like looking for a new beginning.
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Re: Blind Night
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd September 2010 @ 04:51:03 AM AEST
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| nice poem.. i like it.. keep writing.. |
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