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The Lone Sailor
Contributed by
Thivanka
on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 06:00:28 AM in AEST
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The lone sailor.
Sailed all day & night,
Without a crumb to bite,
Till his home, was out of sight.
Alone with the stars and sea,
Like a gaunt, solitary tree,
Alone, wild and free.
The monarch of his own boat,
In search of a distinct port,
Sailing through the silent waters
A puckered black coat.
Coiled within in his finite sphere,
Circled by empty bottles of beer;
Now replenished, by somber tears.
Paddled till his arms were sore,
Drenched the cloths he wore,
As he neared, neared the earths core.
-Thivanka
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Thivanka
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2004-04-16 06:00:28]
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Re: The Lone Sailor
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 07:37:02 AM AEST
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Beautiful descriptive poem! I can feel the deep blue of the ocean in your words...
Great.
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Re: The Lone Sailor
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 03:09:44 PM AEST
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how can this world be better when it keeps getting darker? With each light that is snuffed, this life just gets a bit dimmer.
good write. |
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Re: The Lone Sailor
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by SeanMcHaney on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:54:26 PM AEST
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| Wow truely sad, and truely buitiful. |
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