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Day-time Stargazing

Contributed by Nelly on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 06:03:08 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The only star I see is thee
At day-time.
You never seize to shine.
Life-giving
Though light years outlying.

Someday you shall exhaust.
But even after death
You shall never seize to shine.
For your light reaches me
From afar,
Even later after you smile.

At day-time I gaze,
And never fail
To see your face.

So at night still I seek
But no longer find your smile
So lovely and oh so sweet.

Oh heaven has betrayed me!
Where does it hide thee?

Shining on someone elses world
I know you are
Not mine. No one elses.

But you sense at once I know,
The deepest of my sorrow.
And so youll make me smile once more
By the time you rise tomorrow.

Copyright © Nelly ... [ 2004-04-16 06:03:08]
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Re: Day-time Stargazing (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 06:42:15 AM AEST
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Wonderful ode to the sun!
I like it.
Hur

Re: Day-time Stargazing (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 08:16:19 AM AEST
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I agree. Original and good. Being pedantic, I'd go ask Mick if he could change 'seize' to 'cease', as (i may be under a wrong impression) you have used this word to mean 'take' or 'grasp' when its context is in cessation, or ending.
Just a thought. Fine poem, regardless.
Good work.

Re: Day-time Stargazing (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 05:02:46 AM AEST
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good job.

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