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Bright Night
Contributed by
coaster
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Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 10:02:46 AM in AEST
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Through the dark night, virtually unknown
All bleeding river pours, will soon be sewn
And as if what one will have is what one will own
Listen to the dark night, the wind sings a moan
Even just when all is trapped from the light
Maybe not able to see but I'll always have sight
As I gaze on through the bright nights
All miss consumptions will seem to be right
The goals of my future seem to come on soon
The way to lead is always towards the moon
Though the airs in the way I can still see your face
The visibility of the invisible will be our place
I'm gonna keep on runnin', though it was never a chase
Running through the water only to leave a trace
The holes in the distant will be soon to creep in
The darkness of the light will only induce the sin
Even when you loose, you can still win
Almost a pretty smile, but only a grin
The possibilities of the truth, that it could of lied
The coming of the sensation gives you no reason to hide
When the whistle through your ears only seems to have cried
You can always be able to learn as long as you tried
Copyright ©
coaster
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2004-04-16 10:02:46]
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Re: Bright Night
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:12:56 PM AEST
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Beautiful imagery here! The flow was really nice and it carried me away into a starry nights dream!
Very well done!
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Bright Night
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:54:23 PM AEST
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Beautiful Poem With Lovely Imagery :-)
I Enjoyed It Very Much...Job Well Done
********LoVe**AnGeL*********
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Re: Bright Night
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 02:07:40 AM AEST
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I found this really dreamy with great visuals a very well written piece.
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