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Was it a dream
Contributed by
deepdarkthinker
on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 11:34:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Walking in the room It all goes quiet Sensing doom I walk by it They come one by one to say there respects
I look to detect Seeing my self Asking did I resurrectt It's all a blur Please tell me how or why i'm in here
Then all goes white I follow the light Even though I might Be not allowed My hearts apounding I know i'm daughting
Waking up in my room To the sound of my mom screaming My pill bottles gleaming Realizing the dream was a sign Just in time
I see the newspaper Headlines read local teen dies of drug overdose And there I pose in a picture
ASKING WAS THAT A DREAM
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2004-04-16 11:34:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Was it a dream
(User Rating: 1 ) by kailadragon on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:33:28 PM AEST (User
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powerful poem Sandi, check some of mine out and feel free to comment...........
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Re: Was it a dream
(User Rating: 1 ) by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:44:11 PM AEST (User
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Very Powerful Indeed But Written So Well
Keep Em Coming :-)
*****LoVe**AnGeL*****
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Re: Was it a dream
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 04:54:14 PM AEST (User
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Well this was another from of bland teen junkie whore problem poetry..Christ.. |
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