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Reality
Contributed by
kailadragon
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Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:46:26 PM in AEST
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The reality of my world is darkness
no one can pull me back
my eyes are blinded by sorrow
all I see is black
I don't know how to leave this place
to leave this life of sin
I wish someone could pull me out
and then they'd help me win
i hope that they will hurry up
I want to leave real soon
all i know, is if they're not fast
this is my eternal doom
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2004-04-16 13:46:26]
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Re: Reality
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 02:53:49 PM AEST
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| Good write,well done. |
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Re: Reality
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 07:08:53 PM AEST
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good topic, better poem... very well written.
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