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Take me Away
Contributed by
Hugh
on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 06:18:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm still here
and here I'll stay
until you come
and take me away
So much to tell
but nothing to say
I just can't tell you
Not yet, not today
So here I wait
till in your arms I lay
and then I'll know
I'll be ok
A love so deep
this love will stay
until you come
and take me away
Copyright ©
Hugh
... [
2004-04-16 18:18:45]
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Re: Take me Away
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 04:35:09 AM AEST
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Good succinct write here. I like the way you ended in a measurement of the title. That shows forethought and care in what you've written.
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