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APuddle of Dreams...
Contributed by
JennyFruFru
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Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 09:20:16 PM in AEST
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A little puddle dribbled down the waterfall
It was taken to a land unknown, but it wasnt far at all
A place we all imagined, a place we all have dreamed
A place where our worries are blown away within the breeze
There's crystals that surround it and leaves that like to play
And little munckins hop and frollick to pass the time away
The angels they come singing so that you forget your tired soul
And kittens come to cuddle to make sure that your warm
There's rainbows that can whisper and see over the land
They dont give empty promises and their tales are o so grand
The trees sing all the lullabyes to put the young to sleep
The crickets they keep chirping their precious melody
The puddle must come back right now for little children need a place to play
The puddle is the thing for them that takes their fears away.....
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Re: APuddle of Dreams...
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by Kie on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 09:23:14 PM AEST
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Wow this one was very good.
I long to go to that fairy tale and I remember those puddles that my little feet couldn't help but stomp in hard every time I saw one.
Fantastic poem, really liked this one..
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Re: APuddle of Dreams...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 09:27:13 PM AEST
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This is wonderful, Jenny. It's too bad we grow up and forget it. I remember mine. it was a huge castle with lots of stairs and I would run up and down and up and down and look at the all rooms in the castle. There were always new ones to explore. I really enjoyed this because it reminded me of my 'puddle'.
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Re: APuddle of Dreams...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 10:00:11 PM AEST
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Oh what an absolutely adorable poem..... Thanks for the trip back in time.....
Jenni |
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Re: APuddle of Dreams...
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 11:14:19 PM AEST
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nicely done. If only we all had that lalluby and your puddle of fun. We could smite the evil and play and run. Your poem rang and sung,
beautifully done. |
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Re: APuddle of Dreams...
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by venkat on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 12:49:09 AM AEST
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| Nicely written..this makes me a child of memories. venkat |
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Re: APuddle of Dreams...
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by AspenGlow on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 02:12:59 AM AEST
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To see life through your eyes is a gift you share, one that makes crystals fall from eyes, not out of pain but from happy memories.
Thank you for this, and may you write forever. |
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Re: APuddle of Dreams...
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 01:05:21 PM AEST
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enchantingly beautiful:) hugs n' love, nessa
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Re: APuddle of Dreams...
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 05:41:22 AM AEST
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A POEM THAT DIFFENITELY REMINDS ME OF CHILDHOOD! PRETTY & SO INNOCENT!!
NICE ONE!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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Re: APuddle of Dreams...
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by emystar on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 04:49:59 AM AEST
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this is a beautifull write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: APuddle of Dreams...
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by arden on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 11:35:37 AM AEST
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this was so beautiful the imagery was amazing. such a stunning write. well done.
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Re: APuddle of Dreams...
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:23:05 AM AEST
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| Ah, you've painted a beautiful idyllic utopia for us, thank you very very much for posting this up. |
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Re: APuddle of Dreams...
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by Kie on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 09:49:02 PM AEST
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It is me again. I read this poem AGAIN and remembered how good it was and just had to tell you again that your mind is so imaginative and inspiring.
Kie |
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Re: APuddle of Dreams...
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by Kittenfantastico on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 09:45:47 AM AEST
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| Wow! Awsome. |
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