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Let Me Breathe
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 10:16:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I can never go home again
Why'd they have to go and change everything?
I remember walking the streets
I know so well, yet lost and wandering
I didn't care, couldn't stay there
Packed up and left all I knew far behind
Who knows when I'll be back again?
I'm just looking for what I need to find
Open your eyes
Look into my dreams
See all I missed
You're not what you seemed
Now it's all gone
Everything's changing
Won't change my mind
But you're a stranger
Starting over again once more
Shifting and itching, I'm trying to fit
Into a skin I do not know
But at least I can say I did not quit
I feel I've been turned upside down
Shaken, tossed around and torn inside out
My head is spinning round and round
I've lost my mind, I need to scream out loud
Please shut your mouth
See into my heart
Leave me alone
Let me fall apart
Stop your pushing
You will not change me
I only wish
Life would let me breathe
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2004-04-16 22:16:15]
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Re: Let Me Breathe
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 11:04:22 PM AEST
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again dee, this is brilliant, usually i have a clue where one is getting inspiration, you blow me away with these, some of the finest and deepest writing here of yours and your talent is shining all over, whatever it is driving you, i hope you keep at it, these are amazingly clever:) hugs n' love nessa x
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Re: Let Me Breathe
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by emystar on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 01:35:09 AM AEST
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I hear ya.
I agree with nessa.
Great work of art.
luv, huggs, breathe,
emy |
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Re: Let Me Breathe
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by Dawny on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:41:07 AM AEST
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I agree, deep and emotional writing, its really good.
Love Dawny x |
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Re: Let Me Breathe
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 12:48:42 AM AEST
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I know where your coming from life can be stifling and things change so quickly an excellent read.
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Re: Let Me Breathe
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by Justalady on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 07:10:47 PM AEST
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| Well Moonlit Angel... you've captured the feelings and life experience's of many in this piece. Kind of tugged at my heart.... after all, I've lived a lot longer and saw these words more than once in my lifetime. Very nicely done. June |
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