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Alive she cried
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 11:48:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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----Alive she cried----
She wanted to see
But darkness covered her eyes
She was a princess
Until she learned the world had lied
She ran to her blanket
Alone in the woods
She covered her eyes
But nothing could
Take away the pain
She came to realize
Alone in a blanket with stains
She turned to the moon
With tears in her eyes
Apollo Idled
Before rain came from the skies
----Alive she cried----
Wet with heavens tears
She arised
Sadden with the weight
Of the world on her side
She cried, She cried
She moved to the lake
And swallowed her pride
She thought of what she could take
But knew inside
There was only one way to save this ride
So she sceamed aloud
Hoping to run away the clouds
----Alive she cried----
She fell to her knees
On the mountain top
To plead, oh please
I'm alive
She cried
I'm alive
And with all of her breath
She came to rest
At the feet of another
And he cried
YOU'RE ALIVE
I THOUGHT YOU HAD DIED
I WAS DEAD
FIGHTING WITH MY HEAD
I COULDN'T SURVIVE
THE THOUGHT OF YOU
NOT BEING ALIVE
NOW I CAN FIND
A PLACE IN THIS WORLD
FOR US
WE'RE ALIVE
----ALIVE SHE CRIED---
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Re: Alive she cried
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by emystar on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 12:52:48 AM AEST
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Very deep, creative, unique, strong write!
luv, huggs, hope,
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Re: Alive she cried
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by venkat on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 01:02:57 AM AEST
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| Oh, this is great.. heart touching..wonderfully written. venkat |
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Re: Alive she cried
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 01:14:22 AM AEST
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Ahh This Is Beautiful :-) Very Touching...
Loved It !!!!!!!!!!! Keep Em Coming.....
********LoVe**AnGeL*********
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Re: Alive she cried
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by Kie on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 09:13:15 AM AEST
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Captivating and very emotional.
You took me there. Wow that was good.
Kie |
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Re: Alive she cried
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 01:19:42 PM AEST
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| That was a beautiful poem. I really liked it. Thank you for caring and taking the time. There is nothing to say but thank you and WOW! |
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Re: Alive she cried
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 03:13:00 AM AEST
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| there are times when you read someone's work and you say.........god i wish i had written that.......i consider it a priviledge to be able to read your work......this one rocks!!!!! |
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