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For Susan
Contributed by
alasdaircairns
on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 12:53:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Like June's morn grass longs for cooling dew,
My heart will long always for you,
As eagles soar in skies deep blue,
You make my heartstrings flutter, Su.
As rivers flow to God's own plan,
You love my soul for who I am.
Your raven locks so soft to touch,
I need to feel your love so much.
As sunrise bleaches all above,
I'm covered in your angel's love,
Like losing track in forest maze,
I'm lost inside your warm green gaze.
As twilight warns of deadly night,
I bring you close and hold you tight.
As dreamtime brings a thousand thoughts,
A love like this just can't be taught.
Copyright ©
alasdaircairns
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2004-04-17 00:53:44]
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Re: For Susan
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by emystar on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 01:08:25 AM AEST
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Heavenly beautifull.
luv, huggs, hope, faith,
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Re: For Susan
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by veruca on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 01:13:07 AM AEST
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Lovely!!!!! so romantic....i loved it
kiss kiss,
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Re: For Susan
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 01:50:48 AM AEST
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Says more than a bunch of flowers! a beautiful declaration of love.
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Re: For Susan
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by starlight4215 on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 03:16:38 AM AEST
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| Such a beautiful dedication, hope Susan loves it as much as i did. |
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Re: For Susan
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 01:47:23 PM AEST
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beautifully enchanting:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: For Susan
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by PoloRM on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 12:28:18 AM AEST
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Probably the best love poem I've ever read on YPDC. Great write.
Cheers,
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