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Our Death
Contributed by
pyrofungus
on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 02:07:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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"I want to die!"
Was all you could say
You didn't even have a reason...
My hopes for you were all so high
Yet you would never reach 'em
I always thought that you were kidding
But I guess it wasn't true
Finding your fragile body on the floor
Ripped my soul from within
The gun on the floor was lying
there innocently
So of course I had to use it.
Copyright ©
pyrofungus
... [
2004-04-17 02:07:34]
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Re: Our Death
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by saveMEfromMYSELF on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:00:36 AM AEST
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| Makes me think of my friends and how i would do the same thing if i found one of them dead. good poem. brings out ....thought lost.... but it was something about your poem being really good |
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Re: Our Death
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:56:31 AM AEST
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| RIPPED AT MY SOUL |
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Re: Our Death
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:29:40 PM AEST
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very sad....... hugs n' love nessa
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